Lionhero333

Wow, I am pretty late to the party but ok lets do this... First off I just wanna say, the title... That... That just blew my face off. Ok now ...

This was really good. I would give it a 9/10. Like I always say, something is good when it has a purpose and it serves it. It has an idea/meaning ...

I loved this❤. Truly. Each line of each paragraph is well written and easy to grasp. And I must admit I burst out laughing when I got to the The ...

Wow.... Are you really just only fourteen years old. You have a gift. (The force is strong with this one). In all serious though, this was a really good read. ...

Hey there, im thinking of doing what I call, The Good The Bad The Beautiful reviews. So lets start. The Good From the first to the last word of this ...

Kind've long for a short story (insert laugh emoji). But is good though. This was really great. I was a little bit confused in the beginning part and had to ...

First off, I want to say this was a beautiful poem. You honestly, really did a great job. If I have to be critical, I kinda got lost in the ...

Something I think is very important (in any piece of writing really.) But mainly in period works like historical fiction or historical nonfiction is setting the scene well describing those ...

I like this a lot. It gave me the inspiration I need to come up with something fresh and new. I dont know if you've written stories or only do ...

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Amen to most unoriginal. Also, your formatting, particularly in the beginning, made it difficult to get through. Trim the fat, keep the good stuff.Amen to most unoriginal. Also, your formatting, ...

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I've avoided this piece some time as I have not read 'The taming of the shrew' but I thought I'd have a look... I found this rather humouress and it ...

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I think your grammar needs fixing and I'm not sure that a teacher would act like that so maybe have it between two school friends instead? Here's how the grammar ...

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I dunno. I just thought it went way to quickly. Give us time to really get to know your characters. Take your time. The dialogue could be adjusted too, so ...

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To Ravin, her last words said more than any military commander could tell him. It was as if the battle was already lost, the ghost of defeat already lingering over ...

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By far, the best poem I've read on this site. Don't know if that's a compliment coming from me because I haven't read that many, but hey, take it as ...