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But....but...but....You can't end it right there! Ahem. Hiya Ellie! Finally. I thought to myself. Since it is a thought, it would probably be best to put that in italics. That ...

Hiya Elf! I thought this was pretty interesting from all that I've read, Without an answer , he slowly opened the door. You forgot that comma, hon. Despian knew to ...

Awww....Good job Rosey! I didn't notice this was romantic fiction until the end. :D It was an all-too familiar place for her to spend weekends. This sentence sounds a little ...

Hiya Ashleigh! I haven't read anything of yours, and I thought that this might be interesting. :D IT was that cold unforgettable winter’s day. Typo. The t in it is ...

Hiya emoxdinosaur! Welcome to YWS! We hope you enjoy it here. Since you are new, here is a good look at the reviews . They might come in handy, hon. ...

Hiya Forever! Here is my review. XD I was standing in an enormous castle hall with an enormous ceiling and great candelabras adorning the walls. You used enormous one too ...

Very depressing, but still good! :D What do you do when you can’t move forward in life, when you truly know that’s an impossibility ? I don't think you should ...

I epically fail. Especially since I'm the fifth reviewer or something like that. The way you described Nathaniel's personality was brilliant. I love the way you made it. As soon ...

Hey Selene! I saw this and thought, "Wow, I haven't reviewed anything of her's lately." Here are my nit-picks: School would be starting soon, I knew that in the back ...

Hiya Peanut. This is short, but I think I know where you got this from. Don't make it too much like Push, okay? It was a bad enough movie. My ...

:D :D :D :D ......... Awesome. (end of the amazing critique made by yours truly) Also, curious question? Are you going to make three different versions still? Just curious.

Hiya! I'm Cat and I'll be reviewing you today! :D One thing that we are pretty picky on YWS is our grammar and spelling. There were a whole lot of ...

Have I mention that I've been lazy lately? :wink: Letting her hands drop, she exited the room, but spoke loudly enough for me to hear, “But he hates my guts.” ...

Aw, man. He died. :( Anyway, here are my nitpicks. I couldn’t move, I was frozen looking down at the people so far below me. Awkward sentence. I think you ...

I'm hooked; I want to see what else happens! Anyway, here are a few nitpicks I have. As schools go , its pretty normal. :wink: You probably want that comma ...