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Re: .
Hi Rosey...and I guess Conrad. :P A fantasy done by both of ya'll combined? Epicness all around, darlings. :D But it would only take a few days to heal. Her ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Mother, May I?
Hey Evi! I told you I would review it! (and all points go directly to you) :D David had, against his better judgment, gone through the drive-through window to order ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Mercy
Hi Marsy! *snugs* Before I start, I'm just going to flat out say it - I love your poetry. It's so pretty and it has a lot of meaning. And ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: .
Hehe, Rosey. You told me I could shred, darling. :D I laughed and ran in the shade, catching the ball before it hit the ground. “Nice toss, Karen!” Shade? What ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(4)
Hey again! I'm back, darling. :D “Look, Belle, I would never hurt you on purpose. If I knew you were awake when I was talking I would have never said ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Crying Moon {2}
Hi Kat! zomg, I haven't read anything of yours in such a long time. ^_^ Well, here I am now. That led him to suicide, and she was left alone, ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(3)
Hey there! You request, I come. ^^ “Hey, man, come on in. You want a beer?” Jay ask as Gary strutted in. You switched tenses here. Either changed ask to ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Arizona Princess
Evi, I did say that I would review this, did I not? :D Okay, for that first paragraph, something is annoying me. It's probably just me, but yeah. it would ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: The Two of us
Hi there, and welcome to YWS, darling! :D Now, even though this is pretty short, I like it. It's nice and sweet. But I feel like you could write more ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Nightly Terrors
Hey Jen! :D I'll try going through this for you, since you asked, darling. :D Let's get started then, 'kay? Beneath my feet I feel him. This is annoying me ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: In Place of Mortar
Hiya Hannah! ^_^ It's Lin! Or Cat. Or Catlin. Or Lincat. Whatever you want to call me. :D I am here to review! The men would have grunted in anger ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Life, Love, and Chocolate (Ch. 3)
Hiya Flutey! I'm back! "Hey," he put two fingers under my chin, tilting my face up so that our eyes met. Okay, this is bothering me really bad for some ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Life, Love, and Chocolate (Ch.2)
Hey Flutey! You ask me to review, so here I am. ^_^ Okay, a couple of things. I thought the grammar was really good, so good job with that, darling. ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Lurker
Hi there, Katha! Lin here. Saw this and thought that I would review it. ^_^ So, here we go, dear. :D Rating :arrow: I saw that this was rated PG, ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: A Family Affair
Hi Mike! Lin here. I decided this looked interesting, so I dropped in to read it! ^^ Now, let's get reviewing, darling. :D Thoughts :arrow: Lot's of thoughts are in ...
Apr 26, 2009
