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Re: Chocolate
Amazing!
Mar 18, 2016 -
Re: The Day I Caught the Sun
Wow, cool poem!
Mar 13, 2016 -
Re: The Spasmodic Rodent
It's a squirrel. Yeah, I received other complaints about that line. If I stop to think about it long enough, maybe I'll replace it with something better. Thanks.
Aug 13, 2015 -
Re: The Spasmodic Rodent
It's a squirrel. Yeah, I received other complaints about that line. If I stop to think about it long enough, maybe I'll replace it with something better. Thanks.
Aug 13, 2015 -
Re: Homosexuality--A Discussion for All Whom It Interests
I know the feedback on this has died, but I need to make a correction. In my paper, I attempted to define lust; I was mistaken. Sexual sin is not ...
Jul 21, 2015 -
Re: Being a Writer
This is awesome! You just need to know that, okay? All right? Good.
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Just Tired
Absolutely amazing! I especially like your classic rhythm and rhyme.
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Senseless Hope
Actually, I just saw the classification on your wall; I didn't know! It's good though.
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Senseless Hope
It's good, but I'd like it to be maybe two or three times as long. Otherwise, it just feels like a statement of what anybody could be feeling right now ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: God's Perfect Love
GeeLyria, you have such a gift for explaining things.
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Homosexuality--A Discussion for All Whom It Interests
Yes, queerelves, you could say that homosexual intercourse does not hurt anybody; but that is no more true than the statement that pre-marital sex on the part of heterosexuals does ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Homosexuality--A Discussion for All Whom It Interests
I did not equate them to that; I was picking a live example that people would easily understand. Homosexuality is no more wrong than fornication or adultery (heterosexual sins).
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Change
I personally appreciate the work whether it is how you live your life or not. No, I agree that your philosophy should not be to follow everybody else; however, you've ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Leaders. -> feed back would be great :)
I'm sorry I didn't finish my review yet.
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Thoughts; pronoun
Very well, have it your way. I also have a tendency to do things people don't consider normal.
Jun 26, 2015
