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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :) I hope you continue the story

I'm glad ending it with a dream wasn't too boring for you! I Know it's a bit overused, but I hope I wrote it in an un-cliche way ;) thanks ...

Thank you! I'll fix your recommendations, and thanks for pointing them out :)

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, and I'll definitely let you know when I post the next chapter :) Whoviens unite! Lol

This is a really good poem on self harm. I'm familiar with the subject - not in a person, experience way, but one of my friends used to struggle with ...

Aw!!!! This is absolutely the cutest thing ever XD that ending though, I absolutely squeezed!! I seriously hope you show this to her :) because she will love you forever. ...

Well WELCOME (!!!!) to YWS!!! Keep writing :) I'll check it out for sure

Hahaha, this kinda killed me. I laughed. It's very... odd in a creative way. PUNNYYYYYY!!!!

Thank you so much for reading! You have many questions that will be answered further on in the story, but I feel like I can answer a few. The System ...

Thank you! You have no idea what that means to me :) I agree! I must add more description! But thank you for this lovely review, and I will be ...

*gasp* watch Doctor Who. Right now. You'll love it. I swear.

Thank you for this wonderful review!! I'm really happy you enjoyed reading the chapter :) the feedback made me happy - I'm doing something right!! ^_^ hehe No, actually, I've ...

Thank you for this wonderful review!! I'm really happy you enjoyed reading the chapter :) the feedback made me happy - I'm doing something right!! ^_^ hehe No, actually, I've ...

Thank you! This was very helpful :) I seriously needed a very critical review of this to start off, so I'm glad you were able to deliver it ;) Honestly, ...

I'm very interested! I'm actually reviewing chapter one right now XD I think I might read all that you have because it's quite an interesting story!