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Hey! Nice story you got here :) To start off, the description - although short, because we're only allowed like 150 characters :P - was awesome! Very hooking, very unique, ...

Wow! The beginning was great, because it sort of just took a running leap, and... started! Boom, there it is :P Not sure how to explain it, but I liked ...

Hello! Anna Rae here for a review :) I really enjoye reading this piece! There were a few rocky sentences that you'll need to put in their place (most of ...

Hey!!! Anna here to write a review ;) So, first off, I really liked this piece! I found little wrong with it—beside the usual small grammar stuff—and it had me ...

I'll just jump on into this :) First, I'm just goin to adress the formatting. I've never read anything that's in a play format, and I can't say I enjoyed ...

I loved this!! I love poetry, and you really did a great job on this :) So I'll start with the ONE bad thing I noticed: --Some of the sentences ...

I like the idea of the story. Like a dystopian, sci-fi, made-your-own-world type story. I like those :) and you did a good job with this one. To start off, ...

I actually love how dark and sinister this is! Most poems now a days are full of fluff and rhyming unicorns, so this was refreshing! The words all compliment each ...

Look at you! Getting a review for something you posted a mere 15 minites ago. Congrats for this lovely--and hopefully helpful--review I am about to give. Okay, I like to ...

I picked this out to read because I noticed it was about the Twin Towers. My birthday is September 11 (not the same day the crashed, a few years before, ...

There's only one thing I didn't like, and it was named below. The "TACy" thing. Instead, maybe say "my name is really pronounced like 'Tacky'" or something along those lines. ...

This has very few mistakes, making it the holy grail in my mind. I really enjoyed this piece as a whole. You have great description, awesome character developement, and an ...

This completely portrays what brushing your teeth with someone else is like. It's always so awkward, and you fully grasped that concept in this poem. Relatability is good, so this ...

I expected this to be completely cliche and--honestly?--rather boring. But then I started reading and my mind went berzerk. I can't even believe how much I can relate to Nina! ...

~I'll start this review on what I thought was good in your story. First off, I absolutely love the idea! You've created an exciting dystopian world, and thrown us right ...