Lindsaroo

Yeah this does have good imagery, but it was kind of mixed imagery to me. Like I could see what you were saying but the emotions were mixed to me. ...

I'm just going to come out an say that I really really liked this. You have great imagery in this poem. I could even picture the winged guy and I ...

I'm not very good at lyrics, but I think this was actually nice. Too cliche? No I don't think so. This is only my un-professional opinion though. But I think ...

*chuckles* Aet, you are so silly. This was really funny. It didn't suck a single bit! And and and it made me smile. Which is like superly impossible because I've ...

Ash!!! You did another poem! Yay! Erm...ok, I'm gonna go all critique like now. :) I like it. Of course it had to be about werewolves right? The rhyming pattern ...

...Woah. That's some field trip... Ok, I must say that I really liked this. And I don't usually read a lot of the stories that are posted on here. But ...

Ok...I know this is gonna sound bad...but like...that'd be a cool way to die. I mean think about it! Imagine a battery blowing up in your nose!!! Like dude, they ...

...wow. Bella, I really like this. I mean, I can't even think of something that was wrong with it. Clau can apparently, lol no, just kidding. I think it's nice. ...

Woo! 30 down um...how many more to go? *Calls little penguin in charge of IQ points and is informed that she didn't have 30 to spare* ...Oh no...*shrugs* Oh well, ...

Lizzy, I must tell you this, I really love your poetry. You're very good at it. I really liked the rhyme scheme here. I had it ringing in my head ...

Ok... This can be improved, as the others have pointed out. I just wanted to say that the way you wrote it was ok. I could see what you were ...

...wow... Just wow. This was really good. Everyone got all the advice and tips down, but I just want to say that this was just great. I like how you ...

haha I was really laughing at this. Tina, this is just great. I love Autumn! I wish I had something more like a review to say, but I see nothing ...

Wow, this is really good, Z. :) I almost cried...but I'm really sensitive today. XP And I'm totally against war, but I do suppost the soldiers. I thought the rythem ...

...I could have sworn I commented on this...I know I read it... I really like it, Marc. Really sad, but really good. Man, when you like become a famous singer ...