Published October 12, 2007
I greatly stink at poetry, but I thought I'd try. So don;t be expecting a good poem.
Werewolves
Werewolves are greatly misunderstood
They are seen as beasts
And they probably like to eat humans the least
They would rather mix into to society if they could.
Werewolves are very gentle creatures
Some seek to just live life
But they must live in strife
And sadly they have to many dangerous features.
So this what I have to say
Werewolves may look mean
But they are only seen
As monsters people say.
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I liked this. It was cute and quick and nice, and as I like werewolves, the title drew me in right away.
I did notice that in your first stanza you have an extra "to". You might be well served to delete that.
Other than that, nothing critique-ish to say. I'm sure you're disappointed.
Peace, love, chocolate,
Muffin
Good Job Ash! lol
For Werewolves 
for creative and an overall of 
1/2. Good Job!
As Lindsay said your rhyme was unique I kind of liked it. On the other hand your rythm was A little odd. It seemed very straight forward and mostly information and less poetical language. But over all I liked how matter-o-factly your work was. It was simple funny a bit unrealistic but I liked it! Way to go!
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Ash!!! You did another poem! Yay!
Erm...ok, I'm gonna go all critique like now.
I like it. Of course it had to be about werewolves right? The rhyming pattern is very different. Which could be a good or bad thing, but I think it's ok. Um, I think you need to find a regular length for your lines. They kinda go from real long to real short. But all in all it was nice.
I like your poems, Ash. They're not all "I hate my life" stuff or the rather nice, but cliche, love stuff. I mean, yeah, they're just magical creatures, but it's a new direction.
Keep on working on it!
Lots O' Luv,
Lindsay