Lindsaroo

I agree with Snoink. It seems very choppy and not very nice to read. But I still like it besides that. I really like this part: "I’ll drink to the ...

I real like this because it was nice to just read a happy poem for once. It kind of lifts up your spirits and makes you want to go do ...

Awww I really like this. Bella, you're lucky you got a guy as sweet as this. And of course he's lucky to have such a great girl. :wink: haha Anyways, ...

Hey Jared. Well everyone else went in depth and covered most of it, but I just wanted to add in my thoughts. I like dark and gruesome so this is ...

Well ok, I'm just gonna share my thoughts because I found this. I agree with everyone. I really loved this. It's really nice how you compare the character to a ...

I personally like the first version better. I love how you compare your heart to a homing pigeon. I had never thought of it that way, but now that I ...

Hey there. Hmm...I don't know how I feel about this poem. I like the first two lines because I feel like that a lot and I can relate. (Even though ...

Oh my gosh...this was awesome!!!! I died laughing reading this. It was so hilarious. My favorite part was: Lolly: we only want justice. Ollie: Not me! I want cereal! hahahaha!! ...

haha This was so er...odd? random? funny? I really don't know, but it was really cool. I, at first, thought it was gonna be some sci-fi type of poem or ...

I want to go into full depth reviewing here, but I don't know if I can. I'm kinda lazy right now, but it was a nice poem. I think that ...

Ok just saying, this made me laugh. Yes, it's cliche in the way that this has been written over and over, but it's also relating to a common topic. So ...

I actually liked this. Yes you had absolutely no grammar and everything. But if you ignore that and look at the actual poem and read and understand the emotions then ...

Oh my god Elliot. I'm really sorry. I have to say that this poem was really beautiful kinda made me cry. And I'm not even lying because I have a ...

I like this a lot. Umm...I really can't find anything against it except that in some parts it didn't flow too great. But I'm now totally in love with the ...

Ok this poem was ok, but there were a few things that soured my opinion. Once I used to live a happy life, filled with happiness and no strife. Your ...