LilyLateatNight

So, so clever! These two characters together are hilarious (always joking around and messing with one another) but very realistic (they each seem to have their own demons). Kind of ...

Hey... You have a pretty cool idea going here. The development of the piece should be interesting to watch! That said, here are a few ideas to consider: -Point of ...

Hey there, Your opening sequence was what caught my eye. It was disturbing, even more so by the fact that it's witnessed through the eyes of a child. Well done! ...

Hey there... You have really excellent prose and sentence flow, so the only things are going to elaborate on are some small technicalities. -"I don't know what time it is. ...

Hey! Nice spin on a traditional concept. The twist at the end made it more different and interesting than any other "magic stone" thread I've heard before. Your first paragraph, ...