Lily708

Oops!!Sorry for posting it twice..t'was a mistake though.And by the way looks like your new WELCOME to the YWS Dude!!!;)

Hey,JBangsgaard!! Lily here for a review.It's a really good poem that actually drags you into imagination and puts you into the writer's pathetic situation.Loved the way you showed your misery ...

Thanks...Night Kaizer!Appreciate that pal..;) Yeah...It's like 2-3 reviews on the word piano..I'm definitely gonna change that.But looks like my brain's been jammed for a yeah..I'll try to work on it ...

My pleasure :)

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Hey,Alliyah! Lily here for a review. It’s an amazingly beautiful poem. I never even though about my hands in any of those angles,really appreciable great work! But I think there ...

Anytime..;)

My Pleasure:)

this a poem?!Maybe you're right"The Shortest Poem". Whatever it is I really like it.. "At last, I've found you. " Those 17th words which make two sentences is indicates a ...

Can't fix this heart. Morning mom,Morning Dad. Gateway to my heart. Are those your works??

Woww!!should have guessed..:P

*surely

Umm..I'd surelu love doing that but I don't know your username yet?!:l

Uh-huh....Agree with that wattpad doesn't have any reasonable suggestions or criticism.

Yeah..I did read your posts...I like the way you update your status everytime.Hey,what's your wattpad username? I'm on that too..but didn't post any works.I just keep reading and reading..:P

Hey,Come'on buddy, I don't mind it at all. And thanks for.. you know conversing with me the whole while(a total fresher),your my first friend on this site though...;)