Lilicia

The wind whipped at my hair like an angry beast, whispering dark secrets into my ears. The street was empty; the sky overcast. The papers that had rattled free from ...

You won't understand this if you haven't read the first part. Please review!!! Slowly, the darkness that had numbed my senses with its cradling softness began to lift. Voices began ...

I wrote a story and want to know if it's any good! This is just the first chapter - there's 11 in total. Sorry this is a bit long!!! Please ...

I wrote this for a competition a few years ago and just found it again now - please tell me what you think! My Family history is nothing exciting; no ...

I had to stay in hospital for another two weeks. Practically my whole school came to visit me, each one bringing yet another pointless ‘Get Well Soon’ card that I ...

I've already changed the last chapters according to the reviews, and just to make it clear the main character doesn't know more than the reader. Anyway, please help me make ...

The grass leaks With emerald-green light Which I savour tenderly In my melting brown eyes The sun cries For all its lost, For all its mourned, In its crooked light ...

This is something I started on a while ago - I just wondered whether it's worth continuing. Rip it to shreds, please - it needs it. Badly. CHAPTER 1 ‘So, ...

This is my entry for Amon360's vampire contest. Please tell me honestly what you think, and rip it to shreds while you're at it Thank you! The thick, endless canopies ...

This is my entry for Amon360's vampire contest. Please tell me honestly what you think, and rip it to shreds while you're at it (By the way, if you get ...

My mother always told me that it is wrong to hurt people, and in a way, I suppose she’s right. It is wrong to shatter lives, break hearts into millions ...

This is the beginning of a story I started writing. It's the story of the love between a grandmother and grandaughter. This is just the beginning, so it doesn't come ...

This is somthing I just started. I have a rough idea where I going with this, but I need it to be error-free first! Please help The explosion happened at ...

This is chapter 2 of Silent Chaos, and it needs a lot of work! Critiques are welcome The air felt cold on my skin, and the slight breeze that rushed ...

Chapter three is ready! Well... not quite - I could do with critiques! Thanks! We looked eachother in the eyes for endless seconds, as if the woman were trying to ...

Finally, I've managed to post chapter four! It's a long one, so I split it up in a few parts. Reviews and critiques are very much appreciated! Thanks. “Let me ...

Here's something I wrote while bored one evening... Comments would be appreciated! Life flows around me; a collection of colours, voices and nature. The sun melts lazily on the concrete, ...

This is the beginning of a story I'm working on... Sorry I tried to put certain bits of this in italics by my computer doesn't seem to like that.Anyway, reviews ...

This is something I randomly wrote the other evening. Reviews would be appreciated She looked out of her window, observing the way the plane flew across the sky so effortlessly, ...

The time is one fifteen, and there is a man standing on the rim of Milleu Bridge, waiting for the courage to jump. If you looked any closer, you would ...

This is for LavenderBlue's Best Prologue Contest. Enjoy It began with a bin and a cigarette. The rest kind of just unravelled on its own accord. It definitely wasn’t meant ...

He was Adam, she was Evelyn. The jokes lived around them.“Hey, Adam, can I come and visit your garden sometime?”“Eve, you really shouldn’t be eating that apple.”“Oh, a snake! Watch ...

I fly quietly with a broken pace,Crushing the drunken bluebells -Which stagger, stutter, under my weight.Together, they fight my aroma of far away smells.I leave them soon,For they cry for ...

You wake up drenched in cold sweat. The bedclothes are dripping, and you realise that you’ve wet yourself. Your favourite pyjamas, the ones with the little footballs, are spoilt. You ...

It wasn’t beautiful snow. It was muddy, engraved by the heavy souls of winter boots. Damaged. In the centre: a crack in the earth, narrow and profound. Ice glistened on ...

Spoiler! : This is for Yuriiko's Postsecrets contest Jenny,I’m not a regular.I come every week or so, each time hoping to catch a glimpse of that smile you flash whenever ...

This is for Octave's The Tornadoes Are For You contest. Thanks for reading! ***Kevin

Spoiler! : This is for SporkPunk's Titles contest. Thank you for reading! I walk along the canal, my bare feet creating the unique sound of flesh against earth. The strip ...

Spoiler! : Hey! So I know this is quite rough, I've just written it and am planning to make it the first chapter of a longer story. I'd be grateful ...

“Knock knock.”“Who’s there?” the woman replied automatically. “Eddy.” His eyes were completely serious.“Eddy who?” she said. Her voice had become weary; this was the third time he’