Lil_Pau

Like the title, it's a simple song, but very meaningful. The lyrics convey their message wonderfully, and the whole arrangement actually fits the song. I love this, poor audio quality ...

Hey there! Nice job here. I like the medieval era fantasy-like feel of this poem. Nitpicks: Broken table, how the Seer wishes to greet thee, At your doorstep on bended ...

Awesome work Lily! :D I love the format of the whole poem. Only- Without the biggest baddest members, Rina and Meshie, Fire and Nate Here, this feels unfinished. You just ...

I liked this, especially the structure and the simplicity of the poem. There was nothing forced, nothing exaggerated, something I usually see in these types of poems. Nitpicks: Underneath my ...

Hey! I thought this was rather lovely. It was short, simple and sweet. Lil' nitpicks: We’re falling over our heartstrings laid out like tripwires, waiting for us with sinister smiles. ...

Hey there! I thought this was not bad. I like the imagery in the poem, especially when you compare stars with fireflies. Every ten seconds my reborn shadow fades, I ...

Hey there! I liked this. It's short, but I like the way it was written. It made me envision a fantasy world. (xD) One little nitpick: You will fly tonight; ...

Hey there! :) I like this poem. It's written in a simplistic style, but there's some good imagery there. It had a good start and a good end. :) There ...

Hey there, I'm here to review your poem. Have you ever used it? No? me either Then what is the point to adobe reader? It's supposed to be A dobe ...

Hey Lumierre! I have to admit, this was really well written. The whole message was very clear, very strong too, and the flow was all right. Just one little nitpick: ...

Hey there, nova! I'm here to review your poem! Nitpicks: You beautiful, but the dire situation... Is absurd. It's supposed to be "you're beautiful." And there's no need for a ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your poem. To tell the truth, I didn't like this. It's one of those same ol' love poems that I read every now and ...

Hey there, Rosey! To tell the truth, this does remind me of Shakespeare, at a first glance. Anyway, this is quite short (for me =D), and I couldn't find any ...

Hey there! I thought this was really nice. I like your choice of words and the poem's structure. Nitpicks: I look to the rosy ribbons of light, No need for ...

A good concept, but you have a lot to improve on this. Some tips to help you: 1) Punctuation Poems, like normal prose, do need punctuation. In fact, it helps ...