Lightsong

Yup, I've fallen in love with the characters and magic system. *o*

THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY.

Is it just me, or did I see some irony at the end? Like, Behemoth calls Alex 'Fluffy', indicating her as his pet, but the view would make it seem ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I feel the story's been dragging for sometime, but for a good reason! I hope it is. I'm just building the motives for these characters ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! :D The previous part actually has Gael saying he's suspended. :3 The students in the academy are bloodthirsty (at least the Fighter ones) and Felaris is ...

I think Americans don't use suppose that often. Not to mention how you repeat no . It can be just me though! :D

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I've noticed parts of a chapter doesn't connect to each other more coherently - definitely going to consider that for future parts/drafts. Your example in ...

Oh well. I guess each of us can have different opinion on the poem. ^^

Is it like a voice as in the way you display your character? Like a character having a strong voice.

Oh, something to explain: everyone knows about Gael. He's the only person admitted to the academy who doesn't have the inherent Natural magic. He's a reputation of being a Loner, ...

Thanks for the review! :D I'll take note of your points. Am glad with what you thought about this! :P

Thanks for the review! Hehehe, yeah, Gael should've had a blessing. The reason why he doesn't will be connected to something else. :3 The voice was actually a last-minute idea, ...

Thanks for the review! Ilami does have the chance to meet Gael since he's on the field with those bullies. They easily attract the attention of those passing around. Also, ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, the thought is to make Haka a touchy type of person where he shows his affection toward someone through his actions no matter if that ...