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Lightsong

Lightsong

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: DUET :Chapter 6:

    Hey, I'm here to review this stuff! First of all, I only read this chapter, so if there's any confusion or questions I've made here that are covered by the ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Paper Planes (Ch9)

    Hey, I'm here to give you a review! :D First of all, I apology for not understanding your novel fully since I only read this chapter. Here, I can see ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Martin

    Hey, I'm back to review your piece. :3 #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang (I'm getting tired doing this =_=) Anyway, I like it. It's simple and sometimes simple things can deliver superfluous ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Saphira

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D When someone mentions about cat, I'm naturally drawn to it. I like cats. :3 #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang Anyway, I want to talk about stylistic ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.11)

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D It's been a while since I review this novel chapters. '^' #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang Anyway, I like how this story is leading us too. ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Not At Home In This Depot

    Hey, Storygirl95, am here to give a review again! :) I like this story - it's humorous like the one I've reviewed before although it's in a less quantity due ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 14 Years Ago

    Hey, I'm here to leave a review! :D #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang First of all, I would like to suggest you to change the digits into words. They don't work well ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Man on Fire

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Okay, this poem describes an event of a monk burning himself. While imageries can make the scene powerful and able to grip readers' emotions, ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: terroir

    Hmm. :3 #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang I like how simple this poem is. It gives such an air of mystery around it, how the persona doesn't explain the significance of terroir ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Question, An Answer

    Oh man, you got some serious stuffs there! :D #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang As others have said, I like the glass as metaphor. It doesn't original but here it's used literally ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: x + y = conformity

    Hey, I'm here to review this interesting poem. :3 #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang As a rebellious student, I find this satisfying. I like the idea of it, of opposing the norm, ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Too Close Of An Encounter With The Third Kind

    Hey, I'm here to review this lovely story. :D #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang Anyway, the suggestions ; Anyway, I think you've a problem with dialogue tags. You see, the type you're ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 7

    Hey, SpiritedWolfe! Here to leave a review. :D #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang First, the suggestions ; Sometimes I'm confused with the tenses. Damn, it really had been a long time since ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Eleven

    Hey, Scarlett! Here's me for another review! :D #NaRevWriMo #ReviewDay #GoTeamBigBang As always, the suggestions ; Constantly moving between the dungeons and the throne room hadn't helped, either. I'm

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Faith - Chapter Seven

    Hey, I'm here to review! Well, the reason I'm here is to say how awesome this chapter is... and to point out the glaring consisntency. ;) I like how you ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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