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Hi! Sorry for being late! Here's the review as requested. :D She wrapped the coat tighter around her body in an effort to seek some of the warmth it was ...

Hi, I'm here to review! It's been a while since I review, so the quality might plummet. ^^' The story is interesting from the starting. You've laid out a neat ...

Hi! It's me giving a quick review for this poem. :D I see no stanzas in this poem, so I suspect you have an issue with the formatting. It's pretty ...

Hi! I'm here to leave a short review. :D 1st stanza: So the first line is good. Sufficiently interesting, if I may say so myself. The action and description is ...

Hey! It's been a while since I reviewed your stuff, so let's get into this. :D Everything I've said is meant for improvement, so please don't take it negatively!

Before I review this, I would like to say I haven't read this novel for a while (sorry bout that >.>) and some of the confusions I might have might ...

Hey, I'm here to leave short review. :D look at those aliens, aliens, aliens. The sentiment of looking at aliens is a funny one, imo, and repeating the word aliens ...

Hey! It's me! I'm going to finish this, yey! :D It finally came and he picked me up late that morning. When I got in the car I could tell ...

From relatable... I didn’t want to lay in bed; I’d done so much of that at the hospital. What would I do? Where would I go? I didn’t feel like ...

Hey, I'm here again. Bear with me. :D Instant thought: can't help but to compare Rod with Liz. Obviously the latter is a much more likeable character, but I think ...

I wasn't planning to review this piece as I read, but I couldn't help notice things... so here's me noticing things. :D "God, I don't know what have done if....we're ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D I'm not gonna lie - the lyrical aspect of this poem is what pulls me towards it. The rhyme in stanza one and three ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Benjamin! I'm so glad we see (well, hear) about him again. He's one of my favourite characters in the novel, and I was wondering ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D So naturally I would comment on the structure of the poem. Putting it at the center doesn't seem to have any impact. If anything, ...

Hey, I'm here to review again with the same prepared apology in case I missed something I shouldn't. :D Earlier the police interrogated Cecilia and had mistaken her for being ...