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  • Short Story » Health, Realistic
    Re: Weight

    Hi! Sorry for being late! Here's the review as requested. :D She wrapped the coat tighter around her body in an effort to seek some of the warmth it was ...

    Sep 24, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Faint Etches 1.1

    Hi, I'm here to review! It's been a while since I review, so the quality might plummet. ^^' The story is interesting from the starting. You've laid out a neat ...

    Sep 2, 2019

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Journey of My Heart

    Hi! It's me giving a quick review for this poem. :D I see no stanzas in this poem, so I suspect you have an issue with the formatting. It's pretty ...

    Mar 22, 2019

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Violet

    Hi! I'm here to leave a short review. :D 1st stanza: So the first line is good. Sufficiently interesting, if I may say so myself. The action and description is ...

    Jan 13, 2019

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science
    Re: We yearned

    Hey! It's been a while since I reviewed your stuff, so let's get into this. :D Everything I've said is meant for improvement, so please don't take it negatively!

    Jun 26, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 18.1 (Borders)

    Before I review this, I would like to say I haven't read this novel for a while (sorry bout that >.>) and some of the confusions I might have might ...

    Jun 19, 2018

  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic
    Re: Poem #2

    Hey, I'm here to leave short review. :D look at those aliens, aliens, aliens. The sentiment of looking at aliens is a funny one, imo, and repeating the word aliens ...

    Jun 19, 2018

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (4/4)

    Hey! It's me! I'm going to finish this, yey! :D It finally came and he picked me up late that morning. When I got in the car I could tell ...

    Apr 5, 2018

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (3/4)

    From relatable... I didn’t want to lay in bed; I’d done so much of that at the hospital. What would I do? Where would I go? I didn’t feel like ...

    Apr 5, 2018

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Ghost Man (2/4)

    Hey, I'm here again. Bear with me. :D Instant thought: can't help but to compare Rod with Liz. Obviously the latter is a much more likeable character, but I think ...

    Apr 5, 2018

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Ghost Man (1/4)

    I wasn't planning to review this piece as I read, but I couldn't help notice things... so here's me noticing things. :D "God, I don't know what have done if....we're ...

    Apr 5, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: build me a house

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D I'm not gonna lie - the lyrical aspect of this poem is what pulls me towards it. The rhyme in stanza one and three ...

    Apr 1, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 31.2

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Benjamin! I'm so glad we see (well, hear) about him again. He's one of my favourite characters in the novel, and I was wondering ...

    Mar 30, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Problems

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D So naturally I would comment on the structure of the poem. Putting it at the center doesn't seem to have any impact. If anything, ...

    Mar 27, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 10 Part 3 (First Draft.)

    Hey, I'm here to review again with the same prepared apology in case I missed something I shouldn't. :D Earlier the police interrogated Cecilia and had mistaken her for being ...

    Mar 25, 2018

You have light and peace inside you. If you let it out, you can change the world around you.
— Uncle Iroh, Avatar the Last Airbender