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[quote="olivia1987uk"][/quote] Well, it actually IS part of the story. But you can take it anyway I suppose ^^. Thank you for reading this. And thank you for the comment.

^^ You were right! I did enjoy this thoroughly. ^^ It was interesting. I'd like it, not much to critique, it's all mostly spelled right, so all in all. THIS=GOOD ...

*Is in shock* I'm shocked! That's wonderfully done for a first time romance. I LOVE it! I'm sorry I have nothing better to say, but . . . it's brilliant. ...

Hmm. Hah, I find it interesting that you two wrote this together. Janet screamed in response and nearly jumped off the lounge in fright, "For f**k's sake, Paul!" I suggest ...

This was very unusual. I like the plot, and how it all comes back around again, but there's some stuff that's either out of whack or that doesn't work. In ...

OMG! i believed you! seriously i did! *shamed* nice story!!! - - - Old Balding Writer's Society - - - UNITE!

HA!!!!! RANDOM GUY 2!!!! the first time he kept on talking, i was like isn't he dead? GREAT PLAY, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT! ......hey would you mind us acting ...