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Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three
Hi! I'm Teardrop. First of all, I really like this so far. I think you have an awesome plot going on, keep it up. "Closeing" from the title does not ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Teenager's World
Well, First, I need more detail to give a full review. Minor grammer mistakes. All I can really say is MORE DETAIL. Describe more about how the MC(Main Character) looks. ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three
Hi Libby! I'm here to review the third chapter of Closing The Door On My Past. : D I'll start with nitpicks. She stood up. Just to be safe, I ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Too everybody that commented showing their support: THANKS! Like foreal. I did this poem a long time ago! & Just decided to post it. Thanks again. Keep liking this people. ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby here to review (:, I must say I really liked this. The slang & spelling errors give it voice, they make it feel real. It has so much ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
LibbyLovesDrumswrote: AsxLoversxGo wrote: At first I was getting annoyed with the spelling errors and then I noticed that you had said they were only for style. Then the poem suddenly ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
At first I was getting annoyed with the spelling errors and then I noticed that you had said they were only for style. Then the poem suddenly got sadder. It ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: True Love
This really touches you in the soft spot. I love this poem because it shows the true love and dedication for a person! It's short but I love how the ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Music Of War!
I LOVED the vibe this poem gave off. It was a peaceful, yet shocking feeling. I can't seem to explain it but I think poems touch people in different ways. ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: What we used to be.
Loved it! I seen minor grammer errors that basically everybody pointed out! =)
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: YOU are the love of MY LIFE. R.i.p Baby.
Thanks, the critique is good too! =) Why thank you! : ) And no problem. And no worries, he's up in the clouds at Jesus's side. Watching over you! He's ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: YOU are the love of MY LIFE. R.i.p Baby.
Aww! I'm so sorry! That's a really nice poem. : ) Key Red- Nice, though could have been written a little differently Green- I loved it Note- I'm used to ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: YOU are the love of MY LIFE. R.i.p Baby.
I'll never love somebody as much as iLove you Yeah , Love as in still do, and always will. But (no comma needed) the pain of you leaving, is what ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Always a Brother
*Snap Snap Snap* Lol jk. But this is verrry deep. I think it's awesome. It shows how much you care and love him no matter what his disabilty is! And ...
Aug 23, 2010
