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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three

    Hi! I'm Teardrop. First of all, I really like this so far. I think you have an awesome plot going on, keep it up. "Closeing" from the title does not ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Teenager's World

    Well, First, I need more detail to give a full review. Minor grammer mistakes. All I can really say is MORE DETAIL. Describe more about how the MC(Main Character) looks. ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three

    Hi Libby! I'm here to review the third chapter of Closing The Door On My Past. : D I'll start with nitpicks. She stood up. Just to be safe, I ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To My Guardian Angel

    Too everybody that commented showing their support: THANKS! Like foreal. I did this poem a long time ago! & Just decided to post it. Thanks again. Keep liking this people. ...

    Oct 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To My Guardian Angel

    Hey Libby here to review (:, I must say I really liked this. The slang & spelling errors give it voice, they make it feel real. It has so much ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To My Guardian Angel

    Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To My Guardian Angel

    LibbyLovesDrumswrote: AsxLoversxGo wrote: At first I was getting annoyed with the spelling errors and then I noticed that you had said they were only for style. Then the poem suddenly ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To My Guardian Angel

    At first I was getting annoyed with the spelling errors and then I noticed that you had said they were only for style. Then the poem suddenly got sadder. It ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: True Love

    This really touches you in the soft spot. I love this poem because it shows the true love and dedication for a person! It's short but I love how the ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Music Of War!

    I LOVED the vibe this poem gave off. It was a peaceful, yet shocking feeling. I can't seem to explain it but I think poems touch people in different ways. ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What we used to be.

    Loved it! I seen minor grammer errors that basically everybody pointed out! =)

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: YOU are the love of MY LIFE. R.i.p Baby.

    Thanks, the critique is good too! =) Why thank you! : ) And no problem. And no worries, he's up in the clouds at Jesus's side. Watching over you! He's ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: YOU are the love of MY LIFE. R.i.p Baby.

    Aww! I'm so sorry! That's a really nice poem. : ) Key Red- Nice, though could have been written a little differently Green- I loved it Note- I'm used to ...

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: YOU are the love of MY LIFE. R.i.p Baby.

    I'll never love somebody as much as iLove you Yeah , Love as in still do, and always will. But (no comma needed) the pain of you leaving, is what ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Always a Brother

    *Snap Snap Snap* Lol jk. But this is verrry deep. I think it's awesome. It shows how much you care and love him no matter what his disabilty is! And ...

    Aug 23, 2010


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