Lia

Woot! I finally got to reading it! Thank God for weekends. I won't comment on the mistakes, like punctuation and all that because I am sure you know of them. ...

Won't go into grammar *again* since everyone before had their say. I'm glad I go to read this. I am just back from the main idea where you made a ...

The title really got my attention though. It's very cute (to me anyway). Yeah! That it was what got me reading too. :)) Some might say this was to strong ...

This was so realistic it hit me so to say. :thud: I enjoyed reading it that is for sure and understood the main characters thoughts so well. Very nice, and ...

When I finished I wished I didn't :)). Because I didn't have anything more then speculations and it annoyed me. The idea that I have to wait a year to ...

Este es yo. Soy fuerte; soy valiente. Yo rompo; yo sangro. Yo duelo; yo lloro. Puedo aguantar contra los corrientes. Este es yo. My Spanish is not "super" but "Este" ...

Really cool! Very nicely told and I see you have a gift to take from a painting and make it into a story. Your story telling is flawless only this ...

Somewhere far, far away, a girl examines an identical butterfly, and before the creature can react, rips its wings right off. If she can’t fly away, why should it be ...

Hey hey! Welcome *pops confetti* I have tears in my eyes T_T! It was beautiful and sad. I hope you didn't have to go through such pain. Hugs. My only ...

Oki doki! ^_^ Here I am reading the new story of cinders. It was interesting, no doubt about that. You could have managed without things like this (major annoyed here). ...

Hi guys! I"m practicing an extended response for my exam. I look forward to all your responses :D ! "He is the eternal alien, the outsider." --- Use this as ...

I don't have much to say since everyone else said what it had to be changed and revised. All I will say is story wise it is good. Got to ...

Let us just assume that the grammar was because o fidgety fingers on the keyboard. But let it not happen anymore. For a short story it was interesting, but it ...

Oh you made a my gloomy day of college lighten up. It was so real and so unreal in the same time,and it feel very natural...I don't know, it felt ...

For such a small piece to be so intense it was amazing. Everybody pointed out the flows so I'm not gonna rub on them anymore. It was and it is ...