Lezuli

Hello and welcome to YWS! Though I am but a few months here myself, I hope you enjoy your time here! With that said, I shall commence with the review! ...

Hello! I'm Lezuli and I commented on your last chapter of this. And I must say, this one was even better. Your description of the shadowed man was amazing, I ...

Hello and greetings once again! As always, these chapters thoroughly entertained me. Reading about Hon'i and Isac's interactions is always funny and fun. I also like the way the story ...

Hello! I'm Lezuli and I'll be reviewing this for you! To start out, I would like to say that this seems like it will be a very interesting story. The ...

Hello again! I'm back yet again. The light novel-like atmosphere of the story keeps getting better. I feel like you're really starting to get the way the story flows. The ...

I'm back for the third review of your story! And I must say, this is getting better with every chapter. I really loved the way the protagonist is aware of ...

Hello there! I'm here for a review. I would like to start out by saying that I totally loved this story. The way it started out as kindof a horror ...

Hello! I'm back to review the next few chapters! Ooh, things are starting to get interesting now. I can't wait to read what happens next. Anyways, on to my critiques. ...

Hello, I am Lezuli and I shall be reviewing this work today. My first impressions was that this was an interesting story, your main character seems like a fun person ...

Greetings! I'm Lezuli and I will be reviewing this work for you. Let me start out by saying that I really liked this piece! It was funny and the ideas ...

Hello there~I am Lezuli and I will be reviewing this work for you today! I would like to start out by saying that I definitely enjoyed your story. It is ...

Hello! I'm Lezuli and I'm here for a review! To start out, I quite like the idea of the story so far. It is well written and to me, doesn't ...

Hello there, Lezuli here for a review! I'd like to start out by saying I quite enjoyed your story. I really liked the sense of irony in how the boys ...

Hello, I'm just going to write a quick review for you! I'm going to say some nitpicky things and other such things, but I'm not trying to be mean so ...

Hello! It's time for a review. My first impression of your story was that it was a very complex world that you seemed to have put a lot of effort ...