Lexi

this is so cool! i love how you managed to keep the rhyme as well as the rythym going through the whole thing. That is skill! Keep writing. (Can't wait ...

Don't mean to push you or anything, but can you PLEASE write more on this story, it is so well written and heartfelt and makes the romantic short story i'm ...

Soz, if anybody's interested AT ALL, the blog address is actually it's nothing fancy, just MORE of my poems. (yes, yes, i know. Now settle down)

Oh, and Jash, what do you mean about the title?

Yeah, well, i was in a very wierd mood (well, what do you expect when some maths teacher is trying to teach you statistics)

that is awsome! how on earth do you manage to write for that long without it turning to drivel? Yours truly "that person who can't write poems that are more ...

Really well written at the start but you kind of lost me in the middle, it's sort of...well...random. Great title though, really attention grabbing.

Love the imagery and the rythym is really clear, you should develop this. With those one or two verses to start with you could work with it and make it ...

That is so good! You are going to be writing more of them aren't you? One little tip could be to explain who Falon is a little more, i got ...

i love how you wrote the fire imagery, you kept the rythym really well but the first two or three paragraphes went off the point a bit. Still, all in ...

So true, i have a friend who is a hardcore Wicca believer and she always has to explain what Wicca is, it probably makes it harder coz she goes to ...