Leviari

I'm such a fan of your writing :) Although it's a terrific piece from the first word to the last, the fourth stanza is truly superb. It's so beautiful I ...

Hello! First of all thank you for you review. It's very detailed and full of interesting feedback. The insight you've given me about capitalization is pretty interesting! Speaking of the ...

Thank you for your constructive criticism, I'll try to ponder better my titles :) I absolutely get what you mean about the word "pride" and I sort of had the ...

As I was expecting, your insight has yet again been very helpful. Thank you! I adjusted a few small things here and there, I hope that now it flows better. ...

Thank you so much for your detailed feedback, I really appreciated that you took the effort to review my work despite it being so short. I will definitely fix the ...

Hello there!! Thank you so much for your great review! And ugh punctuation!!! It's definitely not my strong suite, I really need to study it more. I'll listen to your ...

Hello there! Thank you for your review and I'm absolutely fine with the nickname ahah. Have a good day/night!

I loved this song from start to finish: the raw emotion, the spot on images and comparisons, the fluent rhythm, the fine choice of words. "A love truer then integrity, ...

Thank you for your detailed and honest review, I really appreciated your critiques. I corrected the punctuation and I have to admit it's so much better now. Thank you very ...

Absolutely! That's why I'm here :)

I understand what you're criticizing, thank you for taking the time to review. I probably haven't paid enough attention to the overall flow and construction of the poem... I will ...

Hello! This piece is very powerful, especially the first stanza. "Cry me a river, Build me a bridge. You do whatever for me, i give." In these few lines you ...

yes it definitely came across! Stay strong x

Thank you for your feedback! I will most definitely edit it and see if I like it better. I wrote this in just one stanza and with that layout because ...

Thank you for reviewing!