LeutnantSchweinehund

Did I write of instead of with? If so, my apologies. I meant the opposite, with instead of "of". "The thing with sorrow is that". "The thing of sorrow" just ...

Finally! Finally someone who judges rhythm! I cannot tell you how glad I am to see a reviewer who know of the tap-desk method! And overall, isn't that just a ...

Totally. Writing good characters is painfully difficult. The concept is easy, but actually doing something with that concept without making it forced is just so damn difficult. I've got an ...

Oh, thank you so very much for your review... I feared there would be none! It's been 10 days and I was ready to ditch the last part (which is ...

Oh, I see! How very interesting! I wouldn't have thought it, to be honest. Raised my opinion of your work that much more! Loved "The Phoenix" by the way. Extraordinarily ...

Hey, thanks! I might actually follow up on this and finish it some day, but I myself am guilty of never finishing my work. It's always more exciting to start ...

Thanks for the review! I never really took lessons on "proper" English sentence structure. I work purely instinctively, so that could partly play a role in my lack of essential ...

Nothing short of a lovely creation! If you're a relatively new writer like me, I can say with absolute certainty that you have quite some talent! There is something about ...

I agree, yes. It is more or less a summary. I wanted to write it in a Biblical fashion, allowing the reader to make their own image of the great ...

Thanks for the review! Your interpretation is pretty much how I intended for the story to unfold. Originally, it was highly inspired by the Epic of Gilgamesh from Mesopotamia, as ...