Lethero

First off, I can tell you didn't proofread this. There are so many grammatical errors in the first section, it's not even funny. I might point out a few things ...

Thank you for the reviews. During my next post, I will include in a spoiler the edited version of this chapter.

Got my grade for it and I got a 98% on it.

Got paper back and got 88%. Surprisingly, I got one of the higher grades in class. Everybody else got D's or F's.

Here is Story #2: Death by Lollipop, and here is the revised edition of Story #1: Death by Lawn Mower. I have added more, and hopefully a more gruesome demise. ...

Okay, I have to admit: this sucks. Sorry, but it's the cold, hard truth. There's no description, little detail, and the facts are short. I can't imagine what this Tom's ...

Ok, I am back. My mom is going to take the laptop soon, so I'll get done what I can. Somethin' about us not doing our math homework last night. ...

The blessed end-of-year bell rang through the hallways at Clover High School.Before the last echoes had faded out, Hardly noticable, but you need to put a space between School. and ...

Good begininning and description, but it so far does not look like it would be a fantasy story. But then again you only posted one paragraph. Anyways it's a good ...

Here's the edited version of the the original prologue. Otacon’s white lab cloak rustled in the light breeze, he pushed his glasses back into place and stared at the gravestone ...

As always here's the other half. “Can I go?” Orlam asked. “Yes,” said the voice to his great surprise and relief. “You will be released into the city, but I ...

This is short I know, but I think this will end Ch2 so either look for Part 2 or Ch3. Not sure yet. "Isn't that what humans wanted?" Lethero said, ...

I'm not one into Vampires (I'm a Werewolf), but this story was good. I think the others caught most of the same things I did, so I really have nothin' ...

Here is the second half to part 1. Enjoy Last time he meet The Wolf his fur was black as pitch and he wanted to discuss something with Orlam’s job. ...

I am changing this from Chapter 1 part 1 to Prologue.