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Re: The True Story of Cinderella
Hey actorgirl~ HPR here to review! :D *laughs* I love the idea for this story! It's funny and enjoyable. But I think you would ruin little kids' imagination with this ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Toxic Tongues
Hey, hey Dogs! HPR here, just returning the favour. ;) And yeah, I know. According to the rating, this really isn't meant for me. But what to do? It's not ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: You Are Like A Riddle to Me
Hey Jessa! HPR here! :D I really liked your poem a lot. Your rhyme scheme was consistent, the poem flowed very well and I could relate to the concept too! ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Inevitable Departure
Hey ajt! :D I'm hereeee! To review. XD So, I got the concept of your poem. It's really sad. A friend departing and going away. I can relate to it ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Can't say I'm in love
Hey dogs! HPR here to review! Firstly, it's spelt plagiarising. XD Lol. Okay, secondly, I love how you've based it on the song. However, you should put the lines from ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: A howler from Mars
Mikster! Hey! This was amazing! I especially enjoyed the part where he was talking about Hermione and how much he loved *ahem* hated her. XD It was a really good ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Janine
Mikster!
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: The Mood for Melody
Brother! Hey! :D I've never heard the song but I read your poem and I wanted to! I don't have any critiques because the poem seems amazing just the way ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Sinner - A Messenger
Hey TheGuiltyOne! I'm here to review your poem! Your poem was really good and I liked the flow. But, you had a lot of grammatical errors. In the land of ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Winter World
Hello, Stone! I must say, your poem was really good. I loved the imagery. I could totally imagine a cold, snowy winter's day. It was amazing! But, like you said, ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Curse of the Consolation Prize
Hey Anna! I can totally relate to your poem. Even I'm under this curse. Sadly. But, good job! I just have one small suggestion. Your first and last stanzas don't ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Repent
Adam! Lykwoah! Awesome song! It was really good!! I especially liked the repetition though I thought it was just a little too much the first time. I also liked the ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Dinner.
Hey Jas! I'm hereeeeee. To reviewwwwww. But I haven't done so in a long time so forgive me if it's not good enough. Reviewing time! So, nice, short poem you ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: First Kissess and Innocent Wishes
Hellooooooo...... I am here. To. REVIEW!! XD Okay then, let's get started. First off, your poem had a really good concept and I enjoyed reading it. It was short and ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: The Final Dawn
Hey there! I'm here to revieeeeeewwww!! I don't know why, but for some reason this made me remember Twilight. Usually, it wouldn't be a good thing because I really, really ...
Nov 21, 2011