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Re: Haikus (I didn't have much, so my friend donated a bit)
Ah, I love haikus. I don't see anything wrong with this (which is pretty much my excuse for the fact that I have no idea how to critique) but my ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Two Gay Poems
Haha, I really like this, made me chuckle, though I'm not sure if I was supposed to? Anyway, I was drawn to the title like "What the heck?" So I'm ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Monster
Woah, didn't see that one coming. I was expecting a dark but humorous poem when I saw He was a sweet young boy His name was Kevin Killed by a ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Floating
Ah, everything about this poem is so lovely and poetic. I really liked the 'converse with the sweet birds in the baby-soft clouds' part. Nothing really popped out to me ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Starbucks Coffee Cups
I really like this. It was a good and creative idea.. Who knew there could be a story behind litter? I agree with Jasmine, I think "There’s a story in ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Ashes, Ashes
I really, really, loved how you described this. I could really see everything that you were explaining (which means you weren't really explaining at all) and painted a picture. I ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Random Poem
I am absolutely the worst person to critique ANYTHING.. but whatever. You don't mind now, do you? This was amazingly cute and funny and random.. I loved every bit of ...
May 9, 2009