Leja

Comment dramatique!

I didn't get as much of a sense of the setting from this chapter as I have from previous chapters; it's like the characters are taking for granted the world ...

Trying to skip in the river from one rock to the next, (maybe you mean stream? River is too strong to skip in. Exactly.

Random points: - The "But a poem should be..." establishes that what was before was not a poem, and how that could be remedied. - It doesn't matter who he ...

Thanks for everything! All of you guys thought the same thing--it's too abstract, too unconnected. I agree. Here's what I see it as: On the steps to school a senior ...

“Looks like someone fell asleep in back,” Penny teased as she passed me on the way to the stairs. I was caught between wanting to push her and wanting to ...

So the first thing I saw when I looked at this post was "miracle nose warmer" out of context, and it was so random that I started cracking up XD ...

I still don't think that the crucifix reference holds, even after your explanation. Yes, Jesus was willing to give anything for those he loved. Here, it seems like the subject ...

mm, let's try this again ^^ So I decided the title would be better fitting for something else (what, I don't know yet, but I'm sure there'll be something else ...

I can agree entirely that it is plot less. I'm still wondering why I thought I could get away without a plot, actually XD But the fortunes weren't random, actually, ...

I don't find much that's abstract here. The rain sounds musical, yes, but of what consequence is that? At the end, I'm left thinking "so?" And in light of that, ...

Quote: two hundred just follow to make that into thought. that's the twist really, at least that's how I interpreted it, these flashes, these threats of stimuli, spun into thought ...

Scott Westerfeld ^_^

The Thief Lord's mask! Oh good I'm not the only one! XD

Hah, excellent books? yesh; the above is definitely sarcasm ^_^