Leja

[s]Okey doke. The effect I was going for was something like when it rains, the rain will melt the snow on the ground (the ellipses were because the post wouldn't ...

I know you found the last part humerous, Mad, but you were right; it didn't really work with the rest of the poem.

I liked the language of the poem, but I have little idea of what it's about on the whole, especially in the last stanza.

Hah! I'm always ready to agree when someone's complaining about homework! I really liked the first three lines.

I liked it! A nice little piece that sums up your thoughts very nicely (wow, I say nice alot). *jumps up and down* write another! write another!

I liked it alot! As I was reading it, I felt like I was slipping from one line to the next, like when you roll a bouncy ball down the ...

Sorry fishface, I don't really like it either, mostly because it's an embellished children's poem. Also, the lines have nothing to do with each other; they're just there to rhyme ...

This poem made my day. Nothing more to say.

I really enjoyed reading this piece; I think you should continue it.

I liked it! At first, I didn't see that there were sentences within it; this could be fixed by paragraph spacing, if you'd like. Maybe see if you can connect ...

Don't worry, Claudette, this didn't upset me at all; since I'm new to this site, I need people to tell me what I do wrong, so if there's anything else, ...