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Thanks, I suppose because I was brought up as catholic I just drew on the bible because it is what I'm most familiar with. However, I agree with you that ...

Thanks Lucrezia! :)

Hahahahahah food totally does to me when I'm eating something I enjoy. Short, sweet and humorous I like it. Just remember to include a bit more punctuation, cos there is ...

Oh my god, I can't believe I made you cry! I will try and fix up the unclear bits, but thank you for appreciating it. Means a lot :)

I'm glad you understood what I was getting at, and I'll definitely take the paragraph advice on board :).

Thanks for your review :) I know! I neeeed to remember to break up paragraphs! I always forget! Haha!

I don't mean to be rude, and you've helped a lot :) But I disagree on the fact that this is not an essay, there are different kinds of essays, ...

Thanks Birkhoff! I appreciate the criticism, it really helped. However, just on that Doctor pick up...this might seem awkward, but Rob actually isn't the Doctor? Hehe, I suppose that could ...

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Hi LightWolf, Now, I'm not going to go into the grammatical errors and all that jazz, because I'm not here to correct your work, but here to simply review and ...

Ok, I think you have misinterpreted the meaning of the poem. I have corrected it as suggested, but go back and read it if you like, things might be a ...

Thanks a bunch! Appreciate the review!

Thanks a bunch! :)

Wow, there isn't much I can say to correct this. This is truly an astounding piece of poetry, and the kind of poetry I myself would aspire to write some ...

Thank you for the review! :)

Thank you : I'll take your advice.