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OK lets get down to business First , You used a lot of punctuation errors on this sentence " cant you see?" then created a space to make it more ...

I cant do an in-depth review because its long so i suggest that you create shorter story then you can get a lot of reviews ok lets go 1. you ...

Sorry but can i congratulate you on a wonderful series that you have created with the chronicles of a bus when i saw the first chapter i thought that this ...

That First paragraph just kept me reading on the edge of my seat i had goosebumps all throughout the way i couldn't understand a bit of it but then you ...

This is heart smelter because of the way you described the characters feeling in such a way that it made the reader burst in tears just before the end and ...

im Not a fan of poetry but you really showed the darkness and that teeny bit of love at the end of the tunnel as for grammatical errors i cant ...

The Endurance Of Kaelin Is amazing and they way you intrigue the reader into this is amazing but one question why isnt the medicine working isnt it suppose to work ...

Tom Kills Noahs SISTER absolute shocker i thought tom and noah were going to escape and they were going to find a new place and toms brother dies wow you ...

This Was Absolute amazing I think that you should keep and keep making more of these because its absolute amazing the way you focus more and more I get scared ...