Layla

thank you, you guys. :) I'm glad you like it. I'll make those edits, too.

^^she said exactly what I would have said

Ok quick reply until later! Uum I liked this. Great format. Loved the way you wrote it. I'll give you more detail later, my iPods goons to die, an that's ...

Hahaha Layla by Eric Clapton is on my iPod:-P. So I know what you're talkig about, Snoink

Tori1234....yes it is :)

Jeez!! You don't have to be THAT harsh perdido!! Don't just yell at him like that! He doesn't know,, give him a chance

Hey! This is more of a song, don't you think?? Especially because of that one repetitive stanza.

Jenni321 said it all already lol. But you spelled realization wrong. You spelled it r-e-a-l-i-s-a-t-i-o-n

Ooh lala!! I like this. But I have a certain understanding of this and I'm not sure if it's right. Can you elaborate??

Omg!!! I'm totally lost for words!!! I seriously have nothing to correct or critisize, beause THIS, just nailed it. This was great and beautiful, couldn't have said it etter myself.

Good for a first poem I guess. Are you new?? Okaayy, this is good, but it couldve been better. Review other peoples work to see other formats and little nitpicks ...

Thank you Hannah, for your review. And no, I have not, ever, written rhyming poem. All my others are not rhyming because Its hard.

Hi!! Well I see I'm the first reviewer..... This is really good. It makes me feel hella bad. But I hthink grateful is supposed to be spelled greatful. I'm pretty ...

Yeah. I agree with EpsonBelenus. You're really good too. I never would imagine your 14. Aaanyways, this brings up a good point about society nowadays. There's nothing grammaticaly wrong with ...

Borntobeawriter pointed out all the grammer for yah. So I'm just going to tell you what I think... I really really love how you write. I know I already asked ...