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Re: “Technology can help”
"We were just a plain people who don’t use innovative technologies." - Maybe it would be better if you will remove the article "a". I agree that technology can help ...
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Re: Technology; Molding the Future
Good topic choice. You presented informative information in your essay. Although there are some miss typed words, your essay is still good. :D
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Re: "Technology - in various ways"
“Technology is a gift of God” (Freeman Dyson), its talk about that technology is one of the God’s gifts for us. -I think instead of writing "its talk about" it ...
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Re: A Brand Matters
Your title can easily attract readers for as you mentioned above "Many people today are looking for the popular brands when they buy products because they want the best quality ...
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Re: Ensnaring Traps of Technology
Your title and hook is very catchy, it made me curious about your essay’s content. Your topic is also interesting. You chose technology and its disadvantages to wake up the ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Innovations Made by Technology
Hi Kedj :D Thank you for finding time to read my essay :) I really do appreciate it. BTW you made me laugh when you mentioned that you're hearing my ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Innovations Made by Technology
Hi there thank you for leaving a comment :) I'll do some revisions on the things that you mentioned. Thank you for reading my essay :D
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Total Technology Takeover
Hello there :) I find your essay interesting. You made your points clear. Good Job! :D
Oct 2, 2013