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Re: Chapter 1 Wis-per
Greetings! Artsy here for a review. Okay, so this is a nice chapter! I like how this mysterious boy just enters her house, lol. That was pretty funny. And why ...
Fri May 24, 2019 9:08 pm -
Re: Fallen Soul-Prologue
Greetings! Artsy here to give you a review. Wow. This is amazing! Like seriously amazing, starry! The description, words, grammar, punctuation, everything, is amazing! That last part really hooked me.
Fri May 24, 2019 8:57 pm -
Re: All things favourite! Chapter one: The Room
Greetings! I love this! I like the weirdness of it. And the way you descrobe each and every one of the doors is great! I love how they go through ...
Fri May 24, 2019 8:52 pm -
Re: Poem
Greetings! I like this poem a lot. The ending was pretty funny. The part where you say "Just kidding". I also really like how it's so relatable. I have had ...
Sun Apr 28, 2019 8:51 pm -
Re: Forgetful
Greetings! Artsy here to give you a quick review. Hope you are doing well today. The emotions you express are wonderful. I love how you describe everything. The rhyming, by ...
Wed Apr 24, 2019 7:48 pm