Lauren2010

Hey there GloweringStranger! This is a really interesting story, though perhaps not really horror, and a really enjoyable read! I liked how poetic it felt at parts, and the ways ...

Hello again, Tink! Here as requested! Her hatred seemed to be melting, although his had stayed the same for the idiotically good and shining fairy. It seems to me than ...

Hey Tink! Here as requested, though sorry it's so incredibly late! D: Well, let's not waste any more time! Onto the review! Ember's surroundings brightened as the boy opened his ...

Hey Tink! So extremely sorry it's taken me ages to get to this, but I'm here as promised! :3 Onto the reviewing! A spark. A tumble. A climb. Angel and ...

Ellie, dear! I'm here for a review :3 Let's get to it then! Removed at request of author Ahhh, the Female MC Observes Herself In The Mirror scene. Usually, this ...

Hey EvensLily! Lauren here for a review! Let's get to it, then! Little Maggie James had no idea what she was getting into when she narrowed her muddy eyes through ...

Hey there YuePantera! Lauren here for a review! :) Let's get right to it, shall we? The darkness around me grew thick and the eyes of the watcher I could ...

Hey Sierra! Lauren here for a review :) Let's get right to it then! There were a thousand stories about her, all of them as true as the first. This ...

Hey Sureal! Here again! I don't have any nit-picks for this chapter, really. There were a few times where the tenses seemed to be off, which you mention you've noticed, ...

Hiya Sureal! Here as requested! To the review! I struggle to see what I’m doing and wish we could use a torch, but a torch could attract attention - attention ...

Hey Emmzziee! Here as requested! This poem has a lot of really nice phrases to it. For example, I love the opening line: Look at the stars. Why are they ...

The class on Tuesday morning’s registration was buzzing with wild rumours of flying coleslaw and whatever. Wild rumors of flying coleslaw? Did I miss something...? I busied myself worrying about ...

Hiya Ahmad! Time for another review! “...been really quiet since. I’m wondering if he’s gone crazy.” This is an awkward way to start a chapter. It makes the reader confused ...

All prisoners convicted of theft or a violent crime would be released to cause havoc and mayhem. How does he intend to do this? He's out of power, no one ...

Aanndd I'm back ;) On to the review! 7:58 AM 14-FEB-2011 Is this really necessary? It seems kind of weird to include, at least in this format. I then grabbed ...