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Hey Kimmybee! I very much like this poem. The language and images you use are refined and strong, yet don't slap the reader over the face with what this poem ...

Hi purplellamas! I like the concept you have going here. I love rain, and there's so much you can do with it poetically (and so much you can do with ...

Hey Cspr! I usually don't like free verse, as it tends to not have a great rhythm for me (I'm very rhythm and sound based in my understandings of poetry), ...

Hey there, Ben! I quite like this poem! The rhythm is really excellent, and I found myself able to read it through without having to stop and readjust my internal ...

Ahh, I knew she would give into Gautam at the end. Of course, this is much different than I expected, and I like it a lot better than I thought ...

Yes! More Pillboxed! Another lovely chapter, of course. I like that the little boy didn't stay; it would have been so unnatural and strange for him to let Farah and ...

Heather! I love villanelles! And this one is particularly lovely; I adore the lines you have repeating, especially the "one could not love and one could nothing but". Now, you're ...

Hey there spinelli! I'm going to try to offer some feedback on this as someone who has NO IDEA what you're talking about. xD From Hannah's review, I can deduce ...

Hey EydisEy! This is such a sad little poem! I quite like the concept, though, of someone struggling and eventually deciding to end the pain in a very ineffective manner. ...

Hi there MaKriege! This is a nice essay, obviously and english one, and you show you have a stable understanding of the story you're discussing as well as the idea ...

BAHAHA Caught this one in the Green Room! :D I like being back here in the present(?), seeing them in the camp again and getting to better understand what the ...

Ah, so here's what happened to Deepti! I like having the context, and your poeticness is lovely as ever. However, I think I had the most problems with this bit ...

Hannah! I acted too late to catch these still in the Green Room. D: But as loyalty to our dear brotherhood I shall review still! I agree with Pengu about ...

Hello once again! Another lovely chapter! It took me a while to figure out this was a dream, but once I did it didn't take me long to buy it. ...

Hello again, Hannah! Another lovely chapter, of course. Your writing is crisp and clear, with fewer problem spots than the previous chapter. I really like the interaction going on here, ...