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Dang, I wish you had continue this. It has so much potential. Since this is so short, this is going to be a very very short review. First off, I ...

Hai! Welcome to YWS, Laure here for a review! So, first off I found this chapter quite funny especially withe extra, extra part. Sounded like the woman was selling bread ...

Hello, Laure here for chapter seven! (I will try and be nice.) So, let's hit it off with the technies. Then, amongst the babble of fellow students, a voice stood ...

Hai Emo, Laure here for a review! So, the subject of this poem is very relatable. The sharing of secrets across a body of students, I feel nowadays there are ...

Hai fight, Laure here again! So, this chapter was interesting and forced. I'm going to be terribly blunt here and mean, so slab on your honey shield and icing caps. ...

o.o I was off reviewing for two days because of this stupid maths test, and your chapters escalated. Well, at least I don't have to worry about cliffhangers now, so, ...

Hello! Laure here as requested! I must say, this is a wonderful wonderful poem written in such a beautiful and archaic style too! More like Shakespearean really, do you read ...

Happy review day! And thank you for leaving me with nothing to say. xD. Hey that rhymes! alright, I will stop messing around. I see you wanted comment on the ...

Hai Buggie, Laure here for a review! I apologize for not reading the previous parts of this story. So excuse me if I say some stupid things. Oh, this is ...

Hai, Laure here again! I will admit this wasn't one of my favorite chapters or your best chapter either. So, I will get the technical things over and done with ...

That was certainly. Interesting. I will admit the chapter was very gripping and you obviously know how to capture the reader's interest. Though, at the same time for me. It ...

Laure here for a review! So, I have read all your previous chapters but didn't review them because they already had good reviews. As to why no one is reviewing ...

Hai Taci, Laure here again! *pushes glasses up* That was a very intense read. Not so much long, I actually didn't even realize the length of this poem until I ...

Hai Taci, Laure here for a review on review day! Thankfully, I once read a book on Asperger so I know what it is vaguely. But, that's not the point ...

Ahoy! Happy review day, and Laure here to review your prom! Comparing music to Siren's songs, now that is certainly a very interesting metaphor. I really liked the imagery you ...