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Hai! Laure here as requested/ asked whatever. I'm going to outright honest here, I don't really see the difference between this edited version and the last version. It's been awhile ...

*flashes a neon-green light at you* Hai, lass, I is here for a review. Now, if I'm being harsh, excuse me. I have a tendency to do that. Anyhows, let's ...

Hai! I was actually reviewing your chapter one before quitting that and decided to read your prologue. Well, at least now I know what is going on in chapter one, ...

Hai racket! Happy review day! Laure here for a review, man, this was a long chapter and you choose to write it in different POVs too. Interesting take, this is ...

Happy review day! Have a taco! Ok, that was weird, let's get on with. The review. First off, I do apologize for this but I have to give you the ...

Hai Shadow! Happy review day! You're currently my faovurite person on YWS, know why?because I can write about the content for as long as I want without feeling guilty about ...

Hai! Laure here as requested, did you read my reviewing style before requesting? If not, I tend to kill your work. Prepare for an onslaught, lackey. Because Sarah seems to ...

Hai Fiend! Laure here as requested, now I haven't reviewed for a good few days so my reviewing is a tag rusty. As you know, I'm not Hannah so my ...

Hai, I'm back and let's skip the pleasantries. Pre-warning, as I go into each chapter, I get even more harsh. So I'm not holding back anymore. The alarm clock displayed ...

Hai Sarah! I'm so sorry that this review has been dragged out for so long, in fact I should have reviewed this ages ago except I can't figure out a ...

Hai Lisa, Laure here for a review! You see, I'm no master at poetry and is being, ages since I've reviewed one, so this is going to be pretty brief. ...

Hai Neko, Laure here for a brief review! I remember wondering how he kept it clean because his clothes were charmingly dirty. You have two conflicting element here, how can ...

Hai! Laure here for a review! O.o you know when I see short story, I expect something a bit less long? You are better grouping under chapter than short story, ...

Hai Savvy! Laure here for a review! I am on my tablet so I excuse for any mistakes I make. Cleverclogs had already pointed out some of the technical mistakes ...

Hai, I'm back again! I'm going to squash the technical and the content a bit in this review. So, let's go! Night was soon to come, and it was already ...