LaughingHyena

This is brilliant! Taking such random words and turning them into a beautiful poem such as this is extremely inventive and takes a lot of talent. I love the images ...

Excellent poem! I love the use of description; likening the speaker's emotions to the pendulum of a clock is a very inventive way of conveying mood and feeling, and the ...

This is so beautiful...I love the meanings and the use of descriptions, I particularly love the lines 'People often tell me that I'm too shy/my only reply is that I'm ...

Very nice poem indeed, I like the way you convey emotion, particularly in the last stanza. There are just a few things in terms of rhyme and rhythm which I ...

Brilliant writing! I love the way it is written so seriously and the way you give an object like a packet of pork rinds human emotions. The way the man ...

The message behind this poem is sad and very true in many relationships, but perhaps in terms of rhythm and grammar a few things could be tweaked. I see you ...

This is a very intriguing poem indeed, yet also very well-written and interesting. I love the use of language, particularly the last stanza; 'Time could care ridges in my flesh. ...