LastSilverH3r0

Thanks for the review! I see a lot of good points here, and as for the Lucius part... he is actually supposed to end up being the bad guy (but ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! I'll get to working on these things!

Thanks for the review, and yes I do watch Avatar the Last Airbender :b

yeah, I think i might've explained it elsewhere, I just forgot to add it to the story. It's not that important, just a different thing from using summer since its ...

thanks for the review! I definitely see the points you've made here. I don't recall if I went into it, but there are actually seasons, and fira is the name ...

That's a good way to look at it that I have not thought of before! Thanks!

Hey, thanks for the review and I really think that this is a big help. Yea, I was kinda rushing through this chapter without even realizing. You introduced some good ...

I got a few pieces on my profile, but I'd like if you could help out with my L'Karr Stone series, maybe start with chapter 1 if you could.

That's good, I like you're writing style and you should strive to make it different from mine :) I was just giving some tips in case they helped at all

Of course, and if you need any help with commas I can definitely help out most with that. A lot of people are really bad with those and I was ...

Thanks man, I appreciate the honesty and the help. I can really use this to change the mistakes I didn't even think about before.

thanks a lot for the review, but I'm not gay.. I wrote about a girl :b

Hey, thanks for the reviewing! That's definitely a list of things I didn't even notice, I'll see what I can do!

Wow I didn't even notice that slipping right by me. Thanks for the review!