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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: But Home Wouldn't Be The Same...

    Isha, Isha, Isha, man am I impressed, this is just amazing, the words chosen, the metaphors and language techniques conveyed in this single piece is purely astounding, it's much like ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Opposites Attract

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for tonight, like many pointed out I love the dualism of it, it makes it seem innocent, like a young kid ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: wristbiter

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and my first quick look of this piece shows it's a suicide poem, I'm not very fond of them, but unlike many others this doesn't come across ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Again. . . .

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece comes across as the generic mess of cliches and tired ideas, it tries to be poetical with some lines, ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hate You for Loving You

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer right off the bat I shall say this. This is bad. Honestly it's 'woe is me' moan moan poetry, contrived, cliché ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: PRIZE CLAIMED! (Fortune Tellers' Secrets)

    Okay, I'm LastPaladin and as you don't want a review I shall guess. Basically the Fortune Teller confounds the person their and while they're concentrating on the ball the monkey ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Misguided Ghosts ♥

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. This poem had some good but more bad, to explain it seems like it more than one poem, and seems extremely ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sometimes...

    Okay, I'm LastPaladin and found this when looking for more to reviews, it had no comments so felt doubly obliged to. I took you advice and read through it, I ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: remember when...

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece is all tell and never really show, you go on and on but never really establish any interest for ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ded men

    I'm a loss of what to say about this, you certain capture the rawness and emotion of what you convey, but my opinion is you can capture rawness in poetry ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Autumnal Night

    Wow, just wow, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer and just wow! It's not often I'm so impressed with pieces on here, most of the time I enjoy ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Jealousy of the Sand

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and with this piece I felt a mixed bag on one end I loved the personification of the main characters, but on the other hand I felt ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Attention

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall reviewing this piece. My opinion from what I could stand to read was this was Angst, not even constructive, or well written just a ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Two Sides of the Road

    Hello Cheesy I'm LastPaladin and I shall review this piece, I'll first say I was glad chose to read this as it suprised me, but unfortunately, I feel you didn't ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Grown Up Games

    After a few reads of this Vamprye I finally got just of it. But you don't want understanding you want a good review, I shall begin now. Okay to begin ...

    Nov 24, 2010


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