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Re: I Am No Whore
This was amazing I loves this so much it was amazing
Feb 23, 2012 -
Re: Death's Serenade
This is really lovely, I like it I could really feel the dramatic parts and happiness ones in this poem. I also like how you used personification in this also ...
Feb 23, 2012 -
Re: A Passing Memory
You have some true writing potential... I really liked this poem and I like how you had the memory fade in then out... Although I think maybe you should have ...
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: One Step Between Love and Hate
This was a stastina I wrote for english class... its supposed to have the same ending words in every stanza but the last... look up stastinas... but thank you for ...
Feb 3, 2012 -
Re: Stars
You need more detail to try to pull in the reader to this poem a bit more... Its good just try to use more details
Feb 3, 2012