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Re: the burden of aging
Oh, wow. Excellent. This hurt my soul. Great word choice! Except... for... "drank my sorrows away." This is, to me, a cliche description of a significant activity. I suggest rewording ...
Aug 15, 2014 -
Re: I am 21
I know I already commented on this, but still: wow.
May 7, 2014 -
Re: They tell me to be happy, and I am happy
This is great!
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Dead (Climbing Rhyme)
Ooh, I quite like this.
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: freedom
Oh, yes.
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Purge
This poem is very important.
Mar 2, 2014 -
Re: 99 Miles to Council Bluffs, or Infinity
This is so full of everything.
Feb 22, 2014 -
Re: Black and white photo
Good heavens, this is gorgeous.
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: The Color of Pain
WHOOOOOOO. Is this spoken word? Because if it is it's a superstar of one. Perfect euphony, man! Just one suggestion, this line broke the flow a bit for me. Perhaps ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: God Bless the Broken Rose
Ahhh I read this in an altogether Doctor Who-ey way. Lovely though :)
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: Roses and Chocolate
Ooh lah lah, I like the intense and strong aspect of femininity you present. Nice work!
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Am I Writer
Neat! At first I thought it was like, hardcore palindrome, and I was going r-e-t-i-r-w? What? But then It made sense. This is really cool.
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: I am 21
Perfect.
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully
Good grief, I wish a fatigued hour could produce such fine work from me! This was upsetting and beautiful and poetic. Well done.
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: Glass
Me likey.
Dec 6, 2013