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Re: on apologies
Holy mother of god. This is incredible and like ty this pushes all the right buttons for me. You should totally jam with @Lumi and I on a writerfeedpad sometime ...
Nov 4, 2015 -
Re: a smile like suicide *edited*
Ilu ilu ilu ilu
Nov 4, 2015 -
Re: a smile like suicide *edited*
NO NOT YOUR HEART IT CANT BE BROKEN
Nov 3, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 61
I'll come back and review this later but right now all I have to say is GOOD GOD
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 61
good god.
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 59
sounds perfect to me let's do it
Oct 10, 2015 -
Re: the fear of drowning in gravity
omg
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: the fear of drowning in gravity
The underlying one I guess would be that the more you cling to something the more it pulls away. Thus the sweater/water running dry metaphor.
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: the fear of drowning in gravity
what parts don't you understand? xD
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 59
I HATE YOU IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE.
Oct 2, 2015 -
Re: you are my indian summer
punctuation/capitalization is not necessary in poetry. It is a creative device and as poetry is very creative, we as poets have a bit of leadway when it comes to our ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: you are my indian summer
you are ridiculously beautiful
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: where the ocean leaves the sand
Thank you darling!!
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: where the ocean leaves the sand
omg thank you! I totally agree about the wobbly voice. This is the first poem I've written since like... June? So it's kind of like getting back on my feet ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: where the ocean leaves the sand
The one thing I have to critique, is the first words of each line of the poem. The first letter of the first word of every line in a poem ...
Sep 3, 2015