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LadySpark

the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: i've been losing sleep staring at the sun

    You didn't offend me! I just wanted to explain the reason behind it. Once again, glad you liked it!

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stay golden

    Stay golden, Ponyboy.

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: i've been losing sleep staring at the sun

    The bolded part is the title, hon. Also, there is a reason there is no capitalization/punctuation. I don't know if anyone's ever told you this before, but it's considered tasteless ...

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She Never Drank Tea

    "It just seems strange... I guess??" How? "There was random rhyming at the end. I'm not sure if that was on purpose or not. " Everything in this poem was ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She Never Drank Tea

    Thank you so for this review!

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 37

    Length does not measure worth.

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She Never Drank Tea

    You've already got it

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She Never Drank Tea

    No babe, you are

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She Never Drank Tea

    No, hon. And the girl isn't 'messed up' nobody with depression is 'messed up'. Be careful with your choice of words.

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She Never Drank Tea

    I'm so glad you liked it! You're basically spot on with what it was about. Basically the girl is falling apart at the seams, and she just wants out of ...

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She Never Drank Tea

    I'm so glad you liked it! You're basically spot on with what it was about. Basically the girl is falling apart at the seams, and she just wants out of ...

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Satire, Lyrical Re: Shoes Strap Your Feet to the Earth

    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. But I promise, it's a poem xD

    Sep 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter One*

    Thanks darling!

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: These thoughts are killing me

    Babe, we need to be friends, because I related to all of this. The being homeschooled... Just everything. Feel better, and if you want to talk, I'm always around

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: little girls and their polished fingertips

    Thanks my darling! :)

    Jul 10, 2013


You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...
— Dr. Seuss