LadySpark

Thanks darling!

Oh yeah, I forgot. The Title should be Percy Jackson and the Last Olympian

I'm actually editing as we speak, you're totally right about most of it needing cut.

Thanks lovely!

You're welcome! Heehee. And it's totally cool that you have a different opinion, if that's what you were going for, OWN IT! And I actually ran into the president of ...

damn. That too.

You didn't offend me! I just wanted to explain the reason behind it. Once again, glad you liked it!

Stay golden, Ponyboy.

The bolded part is the title, hon. Also, there is a reason there is no capitalization/punctuation. I don't know if anyone's ever told you this before, but it's considered tasteless ...

"It just seems strange... I guess??" How? "There was random rhyming at the end. I'm not sure if that was on purpose or not. " Everything in this poem was ...

Thank you so for this review!

Length does not measure worth.

You've already got it

No babe, you are

No, hon. And the girl isn't 'messed up' nobody with depression is 'messed up'. Be careful with your choice of words.