LadySpark

I just figured out how to fix it, thank god! It was really bothering me too xD I'm sorry about your break up, darling.

for some reason the spacing isn't working on those lines no matter how many times I try to respace it.

You're welcome darling!

However, you can be realistic without telling. It's your poem, do what you want, but I think it would be more potent if you made the imagery the focal point ...

this is whoa

Here, check out and it'll tell you how. :)

Thank you! You're def right about clearer images. I'll work on what you said! :)

Unlike Lumi, my favorite part was when the YWSer pulled out his light saber and tried to kill everyone in the bar. Good times, man.

Don't kill it! Keep working on it! It's a good start!

lol I laugh at this because Isha is literally the best world builder YWS has.

I want this on my gravestone

Thank you! It probably hasn't received much since I just posted it a couple of hours ago lol