LadySpark

brielle, if I insulted you, I apologize. I didn't mean to cause you any offense. I just don't think that sugar coating things does either of us good. Same to ...

brielle, if I insulted you, I apologize. I didn't mean to cause you any offense. I just don't think that sugar coating things does either of us good. Same to ...

Thanks for your criticism, Monster, but considering you are not the one who received the review, I will continue to review the way I review and discuss the review with ...

No it totally is i.e. why I posted it in hopes that someone would push me in the right direction of fixing it lol. I never expected to get a ...

pfft harsh is the best kind of review. keep it coming

i do what i want

I just figured out how to fix it, thank god! It was really bothering me too xD I'm sorry about your break up, darling.

for some reason the spacing isn't working on those lines no matter how many times I try to respace it.

You're welcome darling!

However, you can be realistic without telling. It's your poem, do what you want, but I think it would be more potent if you made the imagery the focal point ...

this is whoa

Here, check out and it'll tell you how. :)

Thank you! You're def right about clearer images. I'll work on what you said! :)