LadySpark

I came here to tear apart you dreams help you nicely, and I can't find anything wrong. cept for: is this how real love feels? I think it would be ...

Hey other, the one problem I have with this is that you tell not show... You seem to have not gotten the Show and Tell concept down yet... This is ...

okay, let me just say: A ballerina CANNOT be able to do that with only a year of training. I'm a ballerina myself, and I know for a fact, theres ...

Hey Saks! Finally here for your long waited for review! Since everyone has gone over the grammatical stand point, I am going to give you 5 key impressions. 1. I ...

Hi Skins! My reviews for you are going to be short. Why? because everyone above me has told you everything I was thinking (LOL). I notice he says bloody a ...

Hi Skins, here after a horrible delay, (I'm sorry for that by the way,) but hopefully, today I can scratch you off my list! I could acutally feel the pain ...

Hi Alllie!!!! 1. I walked past Jason and his shocked expression and tried to ignore Jared%u2019s hurt expression. Why is Jason Shocked? 2. I was too lost in my own ...

Hi Allie!!!! Here to review ch. 8-9 1. I had to leave the hospital shortly after mine and Jason First kiss. 2. I asked dieing to know the answer and ...

well I get the feeling Zoey's a little OCD. OVerall: I liked it. Though it felt very dragged out and slow to me. I like fast paced novels (something Tayna ...

Hi Desy!!! 1. figure sees the crash and walks up to the car the image suddenly fades “Kayla?” a distant male voice says “Kayla? Kayla wake up!” Kayla woke up ...

Hi Sean! Finally here. *snug huggles* distracting you, destroying your resilience. Such a revolutionary.. . this breaks the flow of the poem. What does it add to the line? Because ...

hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...

hi Skinsy!!! 1)Ohmigosh!!!!!!! I love how at the very end you introduced something to make us think. 2) Wow! if I had just witnessed a murder I would be really ...

since everyone already did the nitpicks, I am just going to give my opinions. Wow. As always, your creativity, writing style shines through. 1) Charlie sounds like a girl. I ...

Hi big brother!!!!!!!!!!!! static glimmers too far whats a static glimmer? to reach for - to hold loves! 'tween aspiration and disbelief. I'm not sure if I like this part. ...