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Re: the swimmer
Hello, manilla. I Love this Poem I would like to point out a few things I noticed while reading it though. One, when you have a 'I' make sure its ...
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Re: the swimmer
As a lover of the ocean, I love this.
Oct 11, 2019 -
Re: Trust me, not? (part 2)
thank you! That's what I was going for!
Oct 10, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 27
Opps I meant comma not colon.
Oct 10, 2019 -
Re: Solar Draconic 2
No problem! Also when i said colon I meant comma sorry.
Oct 10, 2019 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 18.2
hope you get a few more reveiws!
Oct 10, 2019 - Re: The Lost Dragon 18.2 Oct 10, 2019
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Re: Little Red Riding Hood
Very well written! I loved how you added the part about how her red cloak is contrasted against the white snow. But maybe word that part differently it's a bit ...
Oct 9, 2019 -
Re: .
This made my cry, I love it though!
Oct 9, 2019 -
Re: .
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Oct 9, 2019
This made my cry, I love it though!