LadyFreeWill

Happy Review Day! So I’ll be reviewing as I read, and then I’ll give some overall comments at the end. [I will also only be reviewing part of this due ...

Huh. Okay, well first I'm going to point out that your italics and bold-face words didn't show up right. The first piece was kind of ... eh. You used the ...

Ooh la la! Me gusta! I like the concept of this -very nice. However, there are several errors you've made. It's mostly punctuation; commas after 'woman' and whatnot. So here ...

Alrighty there. Hello! I found this poem to be really nice. It's simple, which is refreshing, and you still manage to get some emotion and point across. HOWEVER, the last ...

Hi, I'm TSM, and I'll be your reviewer tonight. Alright, down to business. Personally, I don't know what "Gokou" is, so I may be missing the entire point here, and ...

Okay, so I must have a really thick head, because I don't find this offensive. BUT I also don't find it humorous (as categorized), interesting, or even ... it just ...

Ooh! Feels like a song to me! Okay, down to business: To be honest, there really isn't much wrong with this poem. There are some technical things (that I could ...

Nice poem, but... A few nitpicks: 1. The exclamation points made otherwise dramatic lines seem cheesy. The poem could do without them. Maybe you could try using hyphens instead, especially ...

Hi there! My name is TSM and I'll be reviewing your writing today. :) Let's get started. Overall, it was well-written. Although the descriptions and whatnot were extensive, I was ...

Okay. This might be written under 'dramatic poetry', but to me, the end sounded more like one of those emails that are like 'so send it forward!'. Everything was okay ...

Ooh! Nice ending -I really liked it. There length of the poem was nice; real short, and I didn't have to read a lot. The beginning was okay, but by ...

Hm. Well, this certainly is intriguing. I see that you've only got ONE wonder of six written. Going to add them? Anyway, I found your story very nice. There was ...

Hm... been reading Edgar Allan Poe recently, huh? I really like how you turned the poem into a story and then added your own twist to it. The way you ...

Fantastic job! Your poem (though I can see it as a song) is pretty well written, and I definitely did not see any typos or spelling/grammar errors. You wrote about ...

Well, now. That was interesting. Didn't make a whole lot of sense, but it was good, anyway. There were some things that could've changed, though. Some lines, like say how ...