LadyEvvy

There, it should be better now!

Thank you so much for the review! You make some good points. The oxymoron was actually intentional and meant to be a kind of joke, but I can see how ...

Ah, alright. Good! I don't want to miss Schadel.

Oh no! Spoilers! I always find female characters difficult to write for some reason, so it's pretty cool to see yours. And I have definite empathy for you there! A ...

Yay, I've made a person happy! I can definitely see Schadel being an optimistic person, and I think you do show a little of that in this chapter, like how ...

I'm sure the town will be great and very haunted! Good luck laying out the rest of it! And I noticed a bit more description in part 2. And I'm ...

Thanks for the review! I have to agree with you on the characters. I love Siren, but Kou is my baby and she will never be quite as awesome as ...

Thank you for the feedback! Glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'll be sure to tag you when I get done with the next chapter.

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's nice to know how readers are perceiving my characters. And I see what you mean about ...

Thank you for the review! I was actually kind of worried that the necromancy would look like I stole it from you. I promise I didn't, though Schadel did play ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! I'm rather fond of Neil as well. He's my favorite. And I see you've noticed my not-so-subtle foreshadowing. You need to shush with those maybe ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'll be sure to tag you for later chapters! I see what you mean about the descriptions. Most of the other chapters are ...

Thank you for the review, as well as the reviews on the other chapters! I see what you mean about the repetition, and I'll try to go back and spice ...

Thanks for all your comments! I'll go back and take another look at my word choice, and I see what you mean about the descriptions. I really appreciate it!

Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I don't have a whole lot a commentary to give you, so I don't think I can make this a ...